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ALL these pieces really captures the raw emotion and sense of displacement that comes with borderS. both physical and metaphysical.

Otilia Jones does a stunning job of blending voices from poets of different backgrounds, each grappling with their own experiences of boundaries. Andrei Codrescu’s lines about America, "You get hurt where you are born," feel like a powerful reflection on how identity and pain are intertwined with place. The imagery throughout the poem is vivid, whether it's the "snake's tail" slinking past the door in Chen’s lines or the "yellowed paper" in Otilia’s conclusion, which highlights the struggle between defining oneself and remaining undefined, free from the limits imposed by borders.

Borders, Kolya Reshetov powerfully explores the fluid, often painful nature of borders, revealing how they shape identity and belonging, while exposing the hypocrisy in the notion of "freedom" that only applies selectively.

INTRUDER ALERT The Forgotten Muse This piece captures the tension between connection and division, where every boundary becomes both a barrier and a potential point of unity. The imagery of hands reaching out only to retreat perfectly mirrors the fragility of human relationships and the constant push and pull of boundaries.

OPEN- JOZEF CAIN, The music and writing feel like a raw, unfiltered stream of consciousness that grapples with both the intimate and the global. His language isn’t just poetic, it’s a philosophical unraveling of contradictions, where concepts like borders, identity, power, and human connection clash and intertwine. There's a kind of relentless questioning, both of personal and societal norms, that feels deeply urgent. He shifts between moments of selfawareness and global reflection without losing the reader/listener. The way Cain brings together the global (world wars, cold war, global warming, capitalism) with the personal (his struggle with selfcare, care for others) is striking. It's a piece that challenges the reader to think, not just about the content, but about their own place within the larger framework of society.

Marks’ Thalweg is a haunting meditation on identity, migration, and the interplay of memory and geography. The poem’s shifting rivers, both literal and metaphorical, serve as vessels for cultural dislocation and personal history, weaving a complex tapestry of faith, exile, and belonging. The lines between borders, faiths, and histories blur, leaving the reader suspended in the currents of what it means to belong and to be pulled by something larger than oneself.

What stands out in Potter’s piece is the powerful emotional tug between physical and psychological borders. The sense of yearning and struggle against imposed limits resonates strongly, especially in the second section where the frustration over a border "closed by stupidity, selfishness, greed, racism" is palpable.

Laura Catanzano – In America poem sharply critiques the hypocrisy and deep rooted inequality in America, where the promise of refuge collides with harsh realities. What strikes most is the raw emotional appeal, specifically in the depiction of the immigrant mother separated from her child, emphasizing both personal and systemic injustice. The contrast between idealism and the country’s reality is haunting, particularly in the closing lines, where the speaker’s awareness of the disparity feels almost like a quiet, painful surrender.

Sylvia KalinA – The Dark Architecture KalinA’s poem captures the suffocating nature of borders in a visceral, almost rebellious tone. The juxtaposition of freedom versus control, expressed in phrases like “barbed wire hymn” and “chains forsake” creates an intense image of resistance. This poem isn’t just about borders; it’s about the cost of them. The toll they take. It's a truth we can’t ignore anymore.“Land grown grimmer / Slim lines define / Promise grows dimmer / A sign of the times.” It’s like watching the world shrink, the vision of something better fading into the distance. Borders don’t just divide the earth they divide hope.

Like Kalina’s 12th stanza, “What are these borders worth?” really sticks with you, making you reflect on the true cost of division, both the physical and emotional toll. This was an epic post. It moves like a quiet journey, acknowledging the scars left by borders but still offering a glimpse of freedom through poetry. Thanks for sharing the words and audio, such an art. Such a strong post. Makes me feel like my last poem I wrote in my cohort is silly. Here you all are commenting on huge, real life things, and I’m just over here in my head. Thank you for your voices, talents and guts. WELL DONE Otilia Jones, Kolya Reshetov, The Forgotten Muse, JOZEF CAIN, Jeremy Marks, Jonathan Potter, Laura Catanzano, Sylvia KalinA and THE BROOM'S EDGE TRIBE.

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Daniel Hettenbach's avatar

I apologize I can't read all of that. Bad eyes. I took soundings. This is good. A lot of hard work. Smart. Congratulations.

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