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VedicSoul's avatar

This dialectic of decay & hope, in such deep and heavy texture, made me sit up and read again. Putting across urban alchemy.

Thank you 🙏

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Jeremy Marks's avatar

Thank you for reading and for your kind words. 😊

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VedicSoul's avatar

🙏🙏

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Richbee's avatar

Needles to my heart with adrenaline start and then finishes with a dart in the paths taken to I C U, where blood is drawn to become rusty red wreckage yet survival will begin against the walls that draw words into pictures that have a thousand more miles to travel for an answer.

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williamphaynes/elliott's avatar

Enjoyed your writing

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Jeremy Marks's avatar

Thank you for saying so. 😊🙏

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Laura Catanzano's avatar

So very compelling and beautifully done.

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Jeremy Marks's avatar

Thank you, Laura. 😊

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DOMO CAMPOLO's avatar

Ummm, ahhh. Much flavour, oh yes! Would love to wonder what comes next!

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Jozef Cain's avatar

Arigato! Your support and presence here are appreciated, Domo.

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DOMO CAMPOLO's avatar

Thanks man! Like wise - always ✌️

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Just Kayla's avatar

This is so amazing! How cool is this new conversation with such layered audio and sound and such talented poets.

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