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Rea de Miranda's avatar

Brilliant play with poetic verse!

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S y l v i A 🌞 K a l i n A's avatar

Thank you so much! We appreciate you being here. 🌞

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The Forgotten Muse's avatar

Jeremy I absolutely loved the depth in your words. There were many lines that stood out to me.

“I receive permission to forget anything after my origin.”

“When you no longer sweat you’ve approached death.”

Vibes: Spiritual pilgrimage, survival instinct.

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Jeremy Marks's avatar

Thank you. That's very kind of you to say. 😊

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The Forgotten Muse's avatar

Sylvia this was very surreal and beautifully ethereal.

You’re an aficionado of symbolism and i find it interesting to try and decipher each poem you write to see if i can get even a sliver of the meaning contained within.

Vibes: The seductive pull of illusion, chaos, temptation, winds of change, impermanence.

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S y l v i A 🌞 K a l i n A's avatar

Thank you dear Tolu. In some ways I’ve moved a way a bit from the symbolism because it makes it a little challenging to connect with readers sometimes. That was also before I got to know you. Thank you so very much for always sitting with my writing…and Jeremy’s too. It’s rewarding to know that the way I write can connect and be appreciated. 🤗🌞

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